Josefa_Eight ways of looking at friend ship
What is friendship?
but is it a term,that uses
Friend describing you and me
Ship-to show how strong it may be
Friend ship is like the growth of
a tree, it defines the two differences
of what a friend ship could be
the one that have seasons
And those who last for ever
you see a friend can be a leaf
that in time it would fall and leave.
Or it would be a root that,
would always be with you
even if you fal,But what
else can frienship mean?
It means loyalty,help
care, and kindness to those
who need them the most
It means to give with out asking
To make others feel safe
or trusting you,and be able to
tell you their hopes,
to dream with them.
No matter how far
They, or you may be
they can count on you
and you can count on them
You see friendship is not just
A, term to be used,but
it's a way of describing
The friendship that we have
What is friendship?
but is it a term,that uses
Friend describing you and me
Ship-to show how strong it may be
Friend ship is like the growth of
a tree, it defines the two differences
of what a friend ship could be
the one that have seasons
And those who last for ever
you see a friend can be a leaf
that in time it would fall and leave.
Or it would be a root that,
would always be with you
even if you fal,But what
else can frienship mean?
It means loyalty,help
care, and kindness to those
who need them the most
It means to give with out asking
To make others feel safe
or trusting you,and be able to
tell you their hopes,
to dream with them.
No matter how far
They, or you may be
they can count on you
and you can count on them
You see friendship is not just
A, term to be used,but
it's a way of describing
The friendship that we have
3 Comments:
At 10:55 AM,
lichee said…
Nice job. Though you have a bit of the feel of various was of looking at friendship, between certain stanzas you fall into making it just a poem about friendship, rather than exploring a variety of metaphors and perspectives.
At 7:04 PM,
jen said…
i think this was a good poem she deserves an A plus plus well i liked how in the beginning you rhymed the stanzas and you were creative with the words you used . i also like how you put in so many words to describe your topic. many people tend to use the same words and be repetetive and think we wont notice and you didnt do that.
At 7:18 PM,
Anonymous said…
well i think you did a great job in this poem and i really think that is really true what your poem is saying .good job you deserve a really good grade.and i really like your topic.
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